We Put Student Lyrics in Front of Music Industry Reviewers. Here’s What They Said.

What the Tallo Music Group’s first songwriting challenge actually surfaced.

In February, we gave the Tallo Music Group one challenge: write original lyrics about love and share them. Romantic love, friendship, family, self-love… the community went everywhere with it!

From all those submissions, three songs rose to the top — the one the community voted up, the one our featured member picked to highlight, and one the Tallo team couldn’t stop thinking about.

Meet the Reviewers

Bio pic of Anthony, a musician, songwriter, and tech entrepreneur.

Anthony Cardenas

Executive Consultant at VNUE

Bassist and co-writer for multi-platinum, Grammy-nominated Capitol Records artist Great White. Co-founded DiskFaktory.com, an Inc. 500 company. Music tech entrepreneur.

Smiling man in a blue button down shirt and glasses sits in front of a desk with framed certificates and a computer setup behind him

Michael Ryan

Award-Nominated Film Music Editor

Seasoned editor with 35+ years and credits on 150+ films and TV shows, including Netflix’s Wednesday, Spider-Man 3, and Hitch. Four-time Golden Reel Award winner. Voting member of the Academy, Emmy, and Grammy organizations.

Bio pic of Ignacio Izquierdo, an Ecuadorian-American musician and mixed-media artist behind San Igna, known for introspective indie rock with emotional depth.

Ignacio Izquierdo

Musician and Mixed-media Artist

Musician and mixed-media artist. His project San Igna has been featured by KEXP and Remezcla. His music has appeared in Sony and GoDaddy TV campaigns and independent film.

Close up headshot of Allan Rich, award nominated songwriter, smiling warmly at the camera with his arms folded and wearing a black button down shirt.

Allan Rich

Award-Nominated Songwriter

Two-time Oscar, Grammy, Golden Globe, and Emmy–nominated songwriter behind Whitney Houston’s “Run To You” and other global hits. His songs have sold over 65 million copies worldwide.

Bio pic of Eric, a marketing technology and analytics leader with 25+ years of experience helping digital products

Eric Meadows

Marketing Executive at Tallo

Marketing and technology leader with 25+ years building large-scale music platforms, including Guitar Center and Musician’s Friend.

What Our Songwriters Were Actually Practicing

Those skills transfer. They show up in music careers, yes — but also in marketing, film, content, education, and anywhere communication actually matters. Every submission in this challenge was practice for something real.



The Three Top Picked Songs

Collage of student songwriting competition entry featuring a soft portrait titled "Double Take" with a woman holding red roses
COMMUNITY PICK

Double Take

by Arden Eve

What the reviewers said…

Smiling man in a blue button down shirt and glasses sits in front of a desk with framed certificates and a computer setup behind him
Close up headshot of Allan Rich, award nominated songwriter, smiling warmly at the camera with his arms folded and wearing a black button down shirt.
Bio pic of Eric, a marketing technology and analytics leader with 25+ years of experience helping digital products
Collage of four moody indie album cover concepts showing lyric sheets titled “I Would” on a bed beside an acoustic guitar in warm sunset light.
Champion Highlight

I Would

by ERC

What the reviewers said…

Smiling man in a blue button down shirt and glasses sits in front of a desk with framed certificates and a computer setup behind him
Bio pic of Ignacio Izquierdo, an Ecuadorian-American musician and mixed-media artist behind San Igna, known for introspective indie rock with emotional depth.
a bold black design with records and the words "Still My People"
Tallo Team Pick

“Still My People”

by Kelisia Chill

What Our Judges Said…

Bio pic of Anthony, a musician, songwriter, and tech entrepreneur.
Smiling man in a blue button down shirt and glasses sits in front of a desk with framed certificates and a computer setup behind him

Honorable Mentions

Warm lit bedroom corner with string lights glowing above a bed, a guitar leaning against the wall, and a notebook with handwritten lyrics and a bracelet resting on top. The words "WHEN THE CHORDS DON'T STOP" appear across the bed, reflecting a student songwriting moment tied to career discovery through music.
Honorable Mention

“When the Chords Don’t Stop”

by Liam M.

Liam’s emo rock submission was one of the most complete, intentional entries we received — the lyrics, the writer’s note, the image, all of it working together:

“For me, love shows up in a lot of different ways, and sometimes it shows up in one person who changes the way your whole world sounds. “When the Chords Don’t Stop” is about that kind of love—the kind that sticks with you like a melody you can’t shake. It’s inspired by someone really close to me, someone who makes everything feel louder, brighter, and a little more like home, even on the quiet days.

This is my entry for the challenge, along with the album cover art and genre. I wanted it to feel honest, nostalgic, and true to what love has been for me lately. Hope you guys enjoy :)”

Three more writers stood out from this challenge:

Close up of a shattered glass heart resting on a reflective surface with a red rose blurred in the background, symbolizing heartbreak and healing in a student songwriting piece connected to career discovery through emotional storytelling.

Angelina wrote an R&B/Soul, breakup song with a songwriter’s eye for image: “Smile painted like a stained glass, so sweet but sneaky like a serpent.” She used something that looks holy to describe something that isn’t. Her sharpest line hit right in the chorus: “Your public image matters most of all.”

Misty nighttime lake scene with a small boat floating near shore, a glowing lantern inside, and a crescent moon reflected on the water under the title "One More" with "ANNA MARIE" below. The calm, reflective setting captures a student songwriter’s creative process and sense of career discovery through music.

Anna wrote her song for her late uncle, using a chord he made as the backing track. This was the only entry that went there. That took courage. And after the challenge ended, she kept writing and sharing her stories in the community. This is the type of continuous learning attitude we love to see!

Warm toned background with butterflies surrounding small red hearts and a larger cracked heart at the center, symbolizing heartbreak and emotional growth in a student songwriting journey tied to career discovery.

Sienna wrote about falling out of love. About the questions it raises, and the relief of finally letting those feelings become a song.


What These Reviewers Said About Building in a Creative Field

The reviewers split: two pointed to “I Would,” two to “Double Take,” one to “Still My People.” Three songs good enough that five people from across the music industry couldn’t agree. But outside the song feedback, they had a lot to say about what actually matters in a creative career.

Close up headshot of Allan Rich, award nominated songwriter, smiling warmly at the camera with his arms folded and wearing a black button down shirt.

“Talent is the least of it. Networking is maybe even more important than the actual songwriting. If you’re gonna get out there, you better make sure you’ve got the goods — because you only get one or two shots.”

– Allan Rich

Smiling man in a blue button down shirt and glasses sits in front of a desk with framed certificates and a computer setup behind him

“Luck is preparedness meeting opportunity. Know your stuff. Be good at it, be prepared. When opportunity knocks, it may not be exactly what you’re looking for — but it may be a way to get there.”

– Michael Ryan

Bio pic of Anthony, a musician, songwriter, and tech entrepreneur.

“If there is no sale of a gig, there is no gig. You have to be a jack-of-all-trades — a videographer, an editor, a promoter. It requires so much more studying and learning than most people expect.”

– Anthony Cardenas

The full reviewer interviews are coming soon to Real Careers, Real Journeys™, powered by Tallo. Their full career paths, what they actually look for, and what they’d tell someone starting out now.